I would say that the humor is about right and it COULD be funny. In most of the parts you exaggerated too much. Work on your artwork, animation skills and some parts of the "script", then this would definitely get a higher score.
Love your work man! The art and animation is getting better and better for each episode. Keep them coming ;)
i'll try not to animate myself to death, thx for the care ;)
Awesome work. I love the fbf. You could have added some tweening
cuz thats not cheating if you feel that way. I like the idea that Tom would
get in a fight with Luis. But it would've been nice with a little more story.
Why did they fight? How did they get those awesome powers (i'm talking
about the middle finger blast) =P.
And for the art. I thought it was wicked. All the movements makes me
believe you rotoscoped the bitch. I dunno. It's cool.
But at some points they loose character because of the overload fbf.
It's a problem that I believe is worth working on. Good luck and keep
them movies coming! :)
LOL, I NOT USE ROTOSCOPE, IS THE THEORY OF THE FLUID MOVEMENT, ALL MOVEMENT WORK IN CIRCLES, WITH SLOW TO FAST MOVEMENT,, THE STORY NOT IS MUCH IMPORTANT IN REALLY, BUT IF YOU NEED A STYRY IS THIS, "LUIS AND TOM SEE A TROLL, LUIS SAY -SUCK TROLL, BUT TOM LIK TROLL, AND THEY BATTLE IN A PLATAFORM :d"
Det är lika roligt varje gång när man upptäcker en ny svensk animatör.
Det finns inte så många. Inte många bra och som har ett särskilt stort
intresse för animation. Men denhär filmen visar att det finns svenskar
med talang. Jag älskade lugnet i filmen. Man ser inte mycket av det på
Newgrounds. Det ger en avkopplande känsla som är mycket behaglig.
Om man nu ska gå in på den visuella delen så kan jag börja med att säga
att animationen var mycket välgjord och smidig. Jag hoppas att du tänker
fortsätta behålla den stilen. Musiken var sjukt härlig och det var en av
de stora anledningarna till att filmen var så avkopplande. Bakgrunderna
var fint gjorda med mycket att kolla på. Jag tycker att du ska vara stolt
över dehär. Du är jätte duktig. Kämpa på!
It's always great fun when you discover a new Swedish animator.
There are not many. Not many are good and doesn't got a particularly large
interest in animation. But this movie shows that there are Swedes
with talent. I loved the serenity of the film. You do not see much of it on
Newgrounds. It gives a relaxing feeling which is very pleasant.
If we now go into the visual part, I can start by saying
that the animation was very well done and smooth. I hope that you intend
to maintain the style. The music was wonderful and it was one of
the major reasons why the movie was so relaxing. The backgrounds
where beautiful and got many things to look at. I think you should be proud
of this movie. You are really good. Keep it up!
I notice that there where alot of planning behind this.
And that's pretty rare to see a planned flash. They're
most likely ideas people had and made something
they had in mind. But this got a really planned story
that I enjoyed to watch. The animation was also
very good, as the artwork. I was a little disappointed
that you didn't include sound effects. But that is covered
up by the story and animation so you barely notice it.
Good job my friend and I hope to see more from you
next year at Pico Day! :D
Sweet day to be born on man. Yeah, I spent a lot of time on the storyboard for this baby. A lot of people don't like that there were no sound effects, but that was indeed intentional. I didn't want it to detract from the music that I spent so much syncing the animation to. Thanks for the review.
I feel bad for you. So much work, and you got fifth place.
This is tv quality. You can honestly say that this pwns many
other tv shows that runs on Cartoon Network, Disney Channel,
Nickelodeon and Jetix etc.
No worries about it, this is just a new cut of a previous movie that got Daily 2nd place. :) Explosm is a monster that currently, can't be beat. T_T
I love that you base the story from the users ideas.
It shows that you actually care. And the animation
has it own special look that I really like. I was so
glad when I saw another episode of Life in the Portal
at the frontpage.
By watching you animate live has given me more knowledge
then any other YouTube video! Thank you! Big hearts <3 ;D
Whoa. That's cool. Glad my shows are useful for something. xD
Something little inside me died when I saw Pico molest that little boy.
But that was in a good way. We all love some twisted psychological humor.
That's what Newgrounds is about. And you sure are in the right place ;D
Now for the more visual part. I like the animation. Reminds me of Bob And
the Apple. I don't really know, are you the author of that animation too?
Well, the sound work is brilliant and I can only say wow. You got some
great voices and that's pretty hard to find. Congratulations my friend!
Happy Pico Day! :D
You could have checked, but yes. I am the creator of that.
Thank you plenty sir.
I like this. It shows that if you put some effort in it,
you will have something beautiful. It must been a
pain in the ass to draw all those frames.
If you clean it up a bit. Put some cool colors in it.
And some backgrounds, this would be a masterpiece.
I like that some movements almost bump in the
camera like another said. Awesome piece of flash!
I love Limp Bizkit!
I agree with the other dudes. Good music choice.
Animation where also REALLY good, some parts.
And the whole plot trying to bring back the good
old stickman where also nice. MY GENERATION!!
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