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[The College Years 20]

5/10

It wasn't great, it was OK.
The first thing I should mention is that I think you use a little to much of tweens. They can be very helpful. But I didn't see anything other then tweens. There should be more FBF. Like the hands. They where stiff. You could almost think that they where dolls. But the characters where beautiful drawn, all of them, even tho I think they could use a little bit more work and they wasn't that much of eccentric. The graphics for the backgrounds where hard to decide if they where good or bad. Because, in one scen they where fantastic. And in another scene they where really crappy and lazy drawn. So I can't really judge that. The white house was great. The humour wasn't the best. The plot wasn't really great but OK.

To summarize all:

- Work on some of the graphic
- Work on the plot
- Work on the sound quality
- Work on voice acting
- Add a little more Frame by Frame animation

RandomFilms responds:

Yeah I know, I got really lazy with of few of the backgrounds in this one. And I really prefer tweens, I should change the hands more, but its too tedious and would make me loose interest faster. As I usually say, I'd rather have an "ok" project done than an amazing project never finished.

Hopefully in the summer I'll have more time to experiment with FBF with my new wacom tablet

[Such is Life...]

10/10 (Beautiful)

In a sence, you delivered something that made you feel compassion for the flower. Your artwork is fantastic that fits like a glove with the smooth animation. Something you rarely see. Voting 5 and 10, + favourite artist.

[Sketched - Last Requests]

8/10

I notice that the dialogue is the main thing here. And you pulled it off nicely :)
I was kinda thinking that the guy was pretending to be dying to make the
other dude do his chores.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks. We are and always will be proud of our dialogue. That would have been a funny twist if he was pretending, but I guess there's always a hundred different directions you can take a scene. Thanks for the review.

[Left 4 Speed]

10/10

Awesome! Laughed through the whole thing! :D

[Gorilla Warfare]

9/10

The expressions were probably the best in this short. And I got a laugh when Donkey Kong appeared out of nowhere :D

[Roller Coaster Junkie]

10/10

Amazing sound quality, lovely song and the cute animation was perfect.
And the fact that you made me watch this again is one of the big
reasons I give you a 10 +
Good job!

[The Assumption Song]

10/10

Incredible lyrics. I don't know how a human being could EVER come up with such clever and awkward intertwined song as this. I gotta watch it again! :D

10s and 5s for you m8 !!

[Intruder Returns]

4/10 (and that's me being nice)

Like the graphics, but the angles were rubbish.

mmankt responds:

Twoja Stara

["A Slice of the Action"]

10/10

No no no nooo, this aint fair! By those short minutes of my life I TOTALLY felt in love with your animation style and skill. Now I have to watch every single episode. So I say as Mr Swain: You make the rest of us look bad. GOOD JOB! :D

[EFN Episode 1: Lies]

10/10

It wouldn't surprise me if I saw this on TV. You could really make something big with this. I'm looking forward to the next episode.