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[Girlchan in Paradise Ep1]

6/10

First I thougt: Wow. Egotaptor actually made a good shot for his own anime show. All started of REALLY well. And there wasn't a single problem. But then I noticed that along the way it began to be more of a parody.
All the sarcasm. The bad lip syncing, the exaggerated voices and all the fighting scenes. Yeah, you pretty much screwed up.

Egoraptor responds:

...what?

[The College Years 20]

5/10

It wasn't great, it was OK.
The first thing I should mention is that I think you use a little to much of tweens. They can be very helpful. But I didn't see anything other then tweens. There should be more FBF. Like the hands. They where stiff. You could almost think that they where dolls. But the characters where beautiful drawn, all of them, even tho I think they could use a little bit more work and they wasn't that much of eccentric. The graphics for the backgrounds where hard to decide if they where good or bad. Because, in one scen they where fantastic. And in another scene they where really crappy and lazy drawn. So I can't really judge that. The white house was great. The humour wasn't the best. The plot wasn't really great but OK.

To summarize all:

- Work on some of the graphic
- Work on the plot
- Work on the sound quality
- Work on voice acting
- Add a little more Frame by Frame animation

RandomFilms responds:

Yeah I know, I got really lazy with of few of the backgrounds in this one. And I really prefer tweens, I should change the hands more, but its too tedious and would make me loose interest faster. As I usually say, I'd rather have an "ok" project done than an amazing project never finished.

Hopefully in the summer I'll have more time to experiment with FBF with my new wacom tablet

[Sketched - Last Requests]

8/10

I notice that the dialogue is the main thing here. And you pulled it off nicely :)
I was kinda thinking that the guy was pretending to be dying to make the
other dude do his chores.

sirjeffofshort responds:

Thanks. We are and always will be proud of our dialogue. That would have been a funny twist if he was pretending, but I guess there's always a hundred different directions you can take a scene. Thanks for the review.

[Intruder Returns]

4/10 (and that's me being nice)

Like the graphics, but the angles were rubbish.

mmankt responds:

Twoja Stara

[SiL Halloween]

8/10

You got some talent there. I think you have been underestimated. You definitely deserve ALOT more views. Good job!

Brakkenimation responds:

Thanks a bunch!

[mole problems]

Bad

I really don't like these kind of flashes. Beginners that makes bad flash and submit to a site that has ALOT of good flashes that if you watch them this kind just seems like shit. Sorry. But if I were you, I would delete it. :/

dragonman101 responds:

well how else do you supose someone like me should gain valuable feedback and moral support from profesional flash artists like you and the other pros here?

[Quick Random Conversation]

Bad

Work on graphics and sound quality for next time.
And the actuall animation/lip sync need to be better
if you want to make people watch this. Plus I didn't
understand what he said. I really like random. But
this wasn't my taste. Sorry!

Good luck!

supersysscvi responds:

I will. Thank you!

[Santa's Green Dilemma]

10/10

I may have watched this 5 times or more. I can't help it. The graphics are beautiful. The story is superb. And the voice acting is also REALLY good. Especially the elf voice. You should seriously concider making this into some kind of series. Or at least make on each christmas. I really enjoyed it.

Keep it up!

DonkeysBazooka responds:

ha, i really don't know how i could turn this into any kind of a series. thank for the review.