I would say that the humor is about right and it COULD be funny. In most of the parts you exaggerated too much. Work on your artwork, animation skills and some parts of the "script", then this would definitely get a higher score.
Love your work man! The art and animation is getting better and better for each episode. Keep them coming ;)
i'll try not to animate myself to death, thx for the care ;)
Awesome work. I love the fbf. You could have added some tweening
cuz thats not cheating if you feel that way. I like the idea that Tom would
get in a fight with Luis. But it would've been nice with a little more story.
Why did they fight? How did they get those awesome powers (i'm talking
about the middle finger blast) =P.
And for the art. I thought it was wicked. All the movements makes me
believe you rotoscoped the bitch. I dunno. It's cool.
But at some points they loose character because of the overload fbf.
It's a problem that I believe is worth working on. Good luck and keep
them movies coming! :)
LOL, I NOT USE ROTOSCOPE, IS THE THEORY OF THE FLUID MOVEMENT, ALL MOVEMENT WORK IN CIRCLES, WITH SLOW TO FAST MOVEMENT,, THE STORY NOT IS MUCH IMPORTANT IN REALLY, BUT IF YOU NEED A STYRY IS THIS, "LUIS AND TOM SEE A TROLL, LUIS SAY -SUCK TROLL, BUT TOM LIK TROLL, AND THEY BATTLE IN A PLATAFORM :d"
It was the best freaking game i've ever played. It got smooth controlls, nice little rewards. A good feeling and some really cool rockets.
I completed it in 48 days :)
Really good plot. Liked the whole thing. But I don't think that I could play this more then like 5 minutes. But great artwork though :D
Great game. Did all the levels. Have to say that this might be one of the best games Newgrounds ever experienced.
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